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Title: Falling Hero
Author: [livejournal.com profile] badly_knitted
Characters: Jack, Ianto.
Rating: PG
Written For: Challenge 416: Grip at [livejournal.com profile] tw100.
Spoilers: Nada.
Summary: Can Ianto save Jack?
Disclaimer: I don’t own Torchwood, or the characters.





Drabble Version


As Jack started to slip, Ianto grabbed his arm to stop him falling.


“It’s okay, I’ve got you!” He tightened his grip around Jack’s wrist.


“That’s all very well,” Jack gasped out, still teetering precariously, “but who’s got you?”


It was a very good question. As Jack tipped further out, putting more strain and weight on his would-be saviour’s arm, Ianto’s feet started to slip too.


“Shit, I really didn’t think this through,” Ianto muttered.


It was too late to let go; Jack toppled, dragging Ianto with him, and with a horrible squelching sound, they fell in the mud.


“Yuk!”



The End




Extended Version


As Jack started to slip, Ianto grabbed for one of his flailing arms to keep him from falling.


“It’s okay, Jack, I’ve got you, hang on!” He tightened his grip around Jack’s wrist, squeezing so tightly Jack thought he could feel the bones grinding together.


“That’s all very well,” Jack gasped out, still teetering precariously, “but who’s got you?”


It was a very good question. As Jack tipped further out, putting more strain and weight on his would-be saviour’s arm, Ianto’s feet started to slip too.


“Shit, I really didn’t think this through,” Ianto muttered.


It was too late to let go; Jack toppled, dragging Ianto with him, and with a horrible squelching sound, they fell headfirst into the mud.


“Yuk!”


Crawling out, muddy Jack hugged his equally muddy lover. “Not the best rescue attempt ever, but thanks for trying.”


“Next time you’re facing certain mud, you’re on your own.”



The End




Date: 2016-10-06 06:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] raynewton.livejournal.com
Oh dear, back to the hub for showers, coffee and cuddles I see a trip to the drycleaners in Ianto's future. Better than trying to clean up the mud. There will also be a reward from Jack for his attempt at rescue.

Date: 2016-10-07 02:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] too-beauty.livejournal.com
LOL but some kinds of mud have healing power LOL
Fortunately the clean-up could be quite sexy this time!

Date: 2016-10-07 05:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] owensheart.livejournal.com
Lol it sounded so serious in the beginning.

Great drabble ans extended version.

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