Drabble: Cake Thief

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Title: Cake Thief

Author: badly_knitted

Characters: Ianto, Jack, Nosy.

Rating: G

Written For: Challenge 405: Remorse at tw100

Spoilers: Nada.

Summary: Ianto just wanted a slice of his own birthday cake…

Disclaimer: I don’t own Torchwood, or the characters.

A/N: Another one with two versions.

Drabble Version

“How could you?” Ianto asked reproachfully. “That was the last piece of my birthday cake, I was really looking forward to it, but all that’s left are crumbs. Is it so much to ask that I get one measly slice of my own cake? I’m all for sharing, but everyone was helping themselves like there was an inexhaustible supply. I thought you’d have some consideration even if nobody else did.”

Nosy looked suitably remorseful.

“What’s up?” Jack asked.

“Nosy ate the last piece of my cake,” Ianto replied mournfully.

“No it didn’t; I saved you some, it’s in the cupboard.”

The End

Extended Version

“How could you? You know better than to take things without asking, or at least you should!” Ianto glared reproachfully at the miscreant, his eyes full of hurt. “That was the last piece of my birthday cake and I was really looking forward to it, but instead when I come to eat it, all that’s left are a few crumbs. Is it so much to ask that I get one measly slice of my own cake? I’m all for sharing, but everybody else was helping themselves like there was an inexhaustible supply. I thought you’d have some consideration even if no one else did.”

Nosy looked suitably remorseful.

“What’s up?” Jack asked, wandering over.

“Nosy stole the last piece of my cake,” Ianto replied mournfully.

“No it didn’t; when I saw how fast the cake was going, I saved you some. It’s hidden in the top cupboard.”

Jack fully deserved the enthusiastic kiss he got for that bit of foresight!

The End

Comments

[m-findlow.livejournal.com]

Aw! Hugs for Jack for being so thoughtful!

[bk_forever]

He didn't want the birthday boy to miss out and he knew Ianto was so busy being the host he might not see how fast the cake was disappearing!

Thank you!

[owensheart.livejournal.com]

I am sure Jack will get a proper thank you from Ianto for saving him some cake.

Loved both of these.

[bk_forever]

Oh, he will - once the party clean-up is done ;)

Thank you!

[raynewton.livejournal.com]

Innocent Nosy, caring thoughtful Jack. Ianto got his cake and Jack will get an even better reward for his loving action. Win all round

[bk_forever]

Everyone is happy, and Nosy will get hugs after its scolding, and probably a bit of saved cake.

Thank you!