Drabble: Conceding Defeat - Sequel to ‘Hula-la’

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Title: Conceding Defeat - Sequel to ‘Hula-la’

Author: badly_knitted

Characters: Jack, Ianto, Owen, Nosy.

Rating: PG

Written For: Challenge 392: Train at tw100

Spoilers: Nada

Summary: Jack gives up in defeat.

Disclaimer: I don’t own Torchwood, or the characters

Jack was exhausted; he’d been demonstrating proper hula-hoop technique to Nosy for two hours, getting wolf whistles from Ianto and disgusted glares from Owen. The girls thought it was hilarious, and Nosy… Well, the Fluff seemed utterly enthralled by Jack’s antics, but showed no signs of following his example.

Wearily, Jack staggered to the kitchenette for coffee and food.

“I just wanted to train Nosy to do one trick,” he sighed

“You gave it your best shot,” Ianto consoled him.

Out in the Hub, unseen by either man. Nosy picked up the hoop and proceeded to hula like an expert.

The End

Comments

[aeshna-cyanea.livejournal.com]

Aww. I hope that at some future opportunity Nosy will show of what it learned.

Of course, maybe Tosh will discover it when she checks the cctv recordings. :-)

[bk_forever]

I'm sure she will, then she'll show everyone and Nosy will give them a demonstration that will knock their socks off. It mat not be able to jump through a hoop, but it can do just about anything else with one!

Thank you!

[but_can_i_be_trusted]

Of course! Isn't that just the way, lol!

[bk_forever]

Naturally! Jack was hogging the hoop!

Thank you.

[but_can_i_be_trusted]

Quite welcome! :D And I hope Jack eventually finds out.

[bk_forever]

I'm sure the whole team will; Nosy likes to show off what it's learned!

[m-findlow.livejournal.com]

Lol, fluffs have a warped sense of humour.

[bk_forever]

Nosy probably doesn't see it that way. Jack's had his fun, now it's Nosy's turn!

Thank you!

[thepeachymonkey.livejournal.com]

Haha! Poor Jack.

[bk_forever]

He tried so hard... He'll find out soon enough that he succeeded though.

Thank you!

[too-beauty.livejournal.com]

Maybe she wanted to practice alone before showing them!
Lovely!

[bk_forever]

Or maybe there was only one hoop...

Thank you!

[owensheart.livejournal.com]

Aww and Jack didnt even see it lol

Great drabble.

[bk_forever]

I'm sure it's on CCTV though, he'll get to see it later, along with everybody else.

Thank you!

[raynewton.livejournal.com]

Clever Fluff. Just wants to tease Jack who is very patient at times. Nosy enjoyed the training, I'm sure. A lovely series of drabbles

[bk_forever]

Thank you.

Yes, I'm sure Nosy thoroughly enjoyed everything, it loves the attention.

[black59.livejournal.com]

At least Jack took of year !!!
LOL

I'm sure Nosy did not want to disgust by its more technical than perfect !!
On the other hand, I think it's Nosy said if he showed he was learning fast, Jack would have continued to teach her other tricks as he wants to be alone.

[bk_forever]

Nosy is quite happy to learn when it can. it was just enjoying watching Jack so much it was happy to watch as long as Jack kept hulaing.

Thank you!