Double Drabble: Unconvinced
Nov. 24th, 2020 05:09 pmTitle: Unconvinced
Author:
badly_knitted
Characters: Ianto, Gwen.
Rating: PG
Written For: Challenge 632: Satisfy at
tw100.
Spoilers: Set shortly after End of Days.
Summary: Gwen wants to know where Jack has gone.
Disclaimer: I don’t own Torchwood, or the characters.
A/N: Double drabble.
“No!” Ianto snapped, pushed to the brink of endurance by Gwen’s constant prying. “As I keep telling you, I have no idea where Jack’s gone. You were here when he vanished; I wasn’t, so how should I know if you don’t?”
“You were sleeping with him.”
“That’s none of your business, and anyway, it doesn’t mean he confided in me.”
“I don’t believe you. He must have told you something.” Gwen crossed her arms over her chest and blocked Ianto’s way, refusing to budge. “I want to know what.”
“Is there any answer I could give that would satisfy you?”
“The truth.”
“Which is what I’ve been telling you, repeatedly, but obviously that isn’t enough for you. Perhaps you’d like me to lie, tell you Jack just popped out for milk, there must be a queue at the supermarket, that’s why he’s been gone nearly a week. I can’t tell you what I don’t know, and if I DID know something, do you really believe I’d keep it to myself? Jack left, and honestly, after what we did I don’t blame him. Maybe he’ll come back, maybe not, but either way, you’re not helping.”
Ianto pushed past, leaving Gwen open-mouthed.
The End
Author:
Characters: Ianto, Gwen.
Rating: PG
Written For: Challenge 632: Satisfy at
Spoilers: Set shortly after End of Days.
Summary: Gwen wants to know where Jack has gone.
Disclaimer: I don’t own Torchwood, or the characters.
A/N: Double drabble.
“No!” Ianto snapped, pushed to the brink of endurance by Gwen’s constant prying. “As I keep telling you, I have no idea where Jack’s gone. You were here when he vanished; I wasn’t, so how should I know if you don’t?”
“You were sleeping with him.”
“That’s none of your business, and anyway, it doesn’t mean he confided in me.”
“I don’t believe you. He must have told you something.” Gwen crossed her arms over her chest and blocked Ianto’s way, refusing to budge. “I want to know what.”
“Is there any answer I could give that would satisfy you?”
“The truth.”
“Which is what I’ve been telling you, repeatedly, but obviously that isn’t enough for you. Perhaps you’d like me to lie, tell you Jack just popped out for milk, there must be a queue at the supermarket, that’s why he’s been gone nearly a week. I can’t tell you what I don’t know, and if I DID know something, do you really believe I’d keep it to myself? Jack left, and honestly, after what we did I don’t blame him. Maybe he’ll come back, maybe not, but either way, you’re not helping.”
Ianto pushed past, leaving Gwen open-mouthed.
The End
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Date: 2020-11-24 05:31 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2020-11-24 06:20 pm (UTC)Thank you!
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Date: 2020-11-25 09:14 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2020-11-25 11:11 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2020-11-27 10:58 am (UTC)I'm surprised she doesn't need eye drops.*deadpan*
Gwen: But hold on. If no one can see it when the lift's coming up, there's a bloody big hole in the floor. Don't people fall in?
Jack: That is so Welsh.
Gwen: What is?
Jack: I show you something fantastic. You find fault.
Gwen has a way of being on the opposing side of others she works with.
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Date: 2020-11-27 07:17 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2020-11-28 12:07 pm (UTC)Oh why did it have to be that way?!*frown*
We all know you have eyes Gwen. :D
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Date: 2020-11-28 12:11 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2020-11-29 09:37 am (UTC)Agreed. RTD used her as a source of conflict for Torchwood.
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Date: 2020-11-29 11:43 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2020-12-02 10:36 am (UTC)Yeah. That plan obviously didn't work out.*sighs*
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Date: 2020-12-02 11:00 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2020-12-03 10:37 am (UTC)Sometimes it helps to have a female writer on a show. Although it shouldn't have to always be that way. That's why positive role models are important.
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Date: 2020-12-03 11:26 am (UTC)Not that RTD would listen to anyone else when it came to his precious Gwen.
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Date: 2020-12-03 11:59 am (UTC)I see your point. Otherwise a female consultant would be needed.
Dare I say, Gwen had some "Mary Sue Traits".
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Date: 2020-12-03 12:03 pm (UTC)Most men don't know how to write women.
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Date: 2020-12-05 10:03 am (UTC)It's not like Gwen had a time machine.*scoffs*
In other shows, you at least see the character struggle to elevate themselves. I'm thinking Laurel Lance from Arrow trying to fill her "dead" sisters shoes.
I don't pretend to know how the male mind works. That's what research from reliable sources are for. I guess it helps to have a brother for a guys point of view.
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Date: 2020-12-05 11:56 am (UTC)Writers should get their wives' opinions.
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Date: 2020-12-06 10:18 am (UTC)Yes. It was very distracting to the whole storylines.*sighs*
They really should. It would makes things more plausible.
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Date: 2020-12-06 12:12 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2020-12-09 10:08 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2020-12-09 12:42 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2020-11-25 07:27 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2020-11-25 08:23 pm (UTC)Thank you!