Absolutely heart-wrenching. You perfectly translated Tosh's deception and pain. Sadly, Owen will only realize his mistake once it's too late. If you're inspired, maybe you could write second part showing that Owen refuses to acknowledge his love for Tosh for fear to suffer again. This is just an idea. ;D
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Date: 2015-10-28 10:04 pm (UTC)