Drabble: Seeing The Stars

[bk_forever]

Title: Seeing The Stars

Author: badly_knitted

Characters: Ianto, Jack

Rating: PG

Written For: Challenge 351: Stars / Stripes at tw100

Spoilers: Nada.

Summary: Jack always keeps his promises, just not always in a good way.

Disclaimer: I don’t own Torchwood, or the characters.

A/N: Another one that hit 100 words exactly, though this time I did have to substitute a couple of words after I finished because I typed something wrong. Sheer carelessness.

“One day,” Jack had told him, as they lay together earlier that night on the narrow cot in Jack’s little cubbyhole, “I’m going to show you the stars. We’ll get out there in space and I’ll show you things you’ve never dreamed of.”

Ianto had smiled drowsily. “I’d like that.” He didn’t believe it would ever happen, but still it was a lovely fantasy.

Of course, that had been earlier, before they’d fallen asleep.

Now Ianto was awake, and he wasn’t happy anymore.

“Ow! Damnit, Jack!”

He was seeing stars now alright; Jack had accidentally pushed him off the bed.

The End

Comments

[m-findlow.livejournal.com]

Ha ha. Jack, you're supposed to hold on to those you love, not push them away (or off in this case!) :)

[bk_forever]

It's the bed - or what passes for a bed. It's so narrow, one of them falls off every time the other one turns over, lol!

Thank you!

[akawho.livejournal.com]

They need a bigger bed! LOL

[owensheart.livejournal.com]

LOL Jack didnt realise He would make Ianto see stars so soon hee hee.

great drabble

[bk_forever]

And now he's going to pay for it, lol!

Thank you!

[bk_forever]

Ianto's already planning on dragging Jack out to choose one!

Thank you!

[clarahow.livejournal.com]

DAMMIT JACK

[bk_forever]

He's a clumsy boy.

Thank you.

[sagrario martínez castro (from livejournal.com)]

Nobody can say that Jack doesn´t make true his promises (sometimes not the best way)Sorry Ianto!!! (But Jack loves you) I bet too for a very big bed.

[bk_forever]

Ianto will forgive Jack - if he buys a bigger bed!

Someday, they will see the stars for real.

Thank you!

[raynewton.livejournal.com]

Think of the fun to be had when Jack ap0logises. And in MY world, Jack does take Ianto to the stars properly

[bk_forever]

Jack will definitely take Ianto out among the stars, they'll have a long and happy life together out there. In the meantime, they can make each other see stars in the good way. Right now, Ianto needs some cuddling and soothing, maybe ice for his head. In the morning I think they need to go shopping for a bigger bed.

Thank you!

[black59.livejournal.com]

argh

[bk_forever]

Yep, poor Ianto!

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[maldeluxx.livejournal.com]

*sigh* They really *do* need at least slightly bigger a bed that doesn't let this happen so easily XD :) <3<3

[bk_forever]

Ianto is going to insist on it after this incident! He's tired of getting bruised.

Thank you!