ext_193640 ([identity profile] excentric397.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] bk_forever 2015-11-05 07:53 pm (UTC)

Re: The Plass In Summer

Have I not mentioned that before? I love it. Truly.

This bit captures them all so well:
"In the centre of the group was a
sour-faced man with a strident voice that carried easily across the
distance, even though she couldn’t tell what he was saying. To his left
walked a pretty Oriental woman who was deep in conversation with Suit
Guy. She wondered if this was Suit Guy’s significant other. The last
member of the group was a busty brunette, hanging on to Coat Guy’s arm
and talking non-stop. Coat Guy didn’t seem to be listening, he was
watching Suit Guy from the corner of his eye, a wistful expression on
his face."

It's all such a synopsis of their relationship, just looked on from someone else's eyes,and that makes it so real. And the last section just made it perfect. I keep my most favs on my older Kindle (also on Dropbox and on my hard drive, just in case), and this was one of the first ones to go there.

It's kind of the perfect story.

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