Good story you have here, but they aren't all that pure, in either attitude nor in choices overall; that was the one thing I didn't like about the story overall- not your work, but the television show.
I do, however, really like this work you've done.
The reply title I picked deals with how this story deals with Faith's views on Buffy and their overall relationship, which has been really badly translated over the years by many fans into what they *wanted* to have happen instead of what was going on in the television show.
Sincerely one of your hopefully entirely too many fans;
Vantiri.